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With Miss Napper

the magic pencil.

May22

A  girl  called   Alex  was at  the huge football  staidium.  She loved football.

It was a lovely day.Alex  didn,t  like her village.

There  was nothing  to  do  but  she  found a gleeming pencil she thout it was usless.But it wasn,t  when she drew india…

it came to life she was in india. It was   awsome she  found a friend   called Anna.

Anna whent home  with  Alex. She  drew  a lion  the pencil…

snaped. “OH NO!” she shouted.

It was a lovely lion aswell.She asked  Anna”what should I do!”.Anna sugested to  sharpen it.

Alex siad “I didn,t think of that!”and tryed it.When she sharpend it

it  looked brand new.so she caried on whith her lion it looked lovely  finished.

Alex had a lovely life from then on. she liked to play whith Anna

and she loved to draw whith the incredible magic pencil.

Anna had a lovely life too.

 

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The magic pencil

May22

This is the story of a slim little girl called Alex she was in her huge garden with her little brother called Christopher he dropped a pencil. Alex didnot no that it was magic but started to write with it. But the pencil snapped badley Alex did not have any money and a pencil sharpener is £5;00 so she did some chores to get £5;00. She got £5;00 and got on her bike and road to Tesco to buy a pencil.

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the magic pencil

May22

one sunny morning  alex was at scool and doing litreacy she said yeh she came down she saw a pencil she had a CLOSER LOOK AT IT AND THAT SAME NIGHT SHE DREW CHINA THEN SHE TRANSPORTED TO CHINA SHE SAID WHOWCOME I DONT NO THE LANGUEGE SHE REALISED IM IN CHINA SHE TRYD AND TRD THEN SHE WAS AT HOME BECAUSE SCOOL WAS OVER SHE DREW SOMETHING ELSE AND THE LED SNAPPED SHE SIAD WHAT SHOUD I DO.THEN SHE REALISED SHE COULD SHARPEN IT SO SHE ID THEN IT WAS BACK TO NORMAL SHE SAID FEW SHE DREW ALSORTS OF THINGS TOYS,PETS,A NEW CAR,AND THE FINAL ONE A HOUSE AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER THE END.

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The magic pencle

May22

Once a pon a  time a girl  called alex she wanted an avencher  she was walking to the park she saw a magic pencle. She uset it then it tuck her to Jermany. She uset it  again  she dispide Back she.  notist that it was brocken.   she   glued it  again and again and again but Finally it was fixet she tried it but it was  still brocken. so she tuck it home and  tolled her DaD He Fixed it.Then sheTuck it Back To Shcool The End.

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the magic pencil

May22

One day a pretty girl called Alex was outside in her beautiful front garden it was a very sunny day.Alex was a very kind and helpful  girl but she was always bored.Alex diden,t like where she lived she was so bored.Because it was just  like a boring deset it was always hot to.A pencil just appeard and Alex just found the magic pencil.The magic pencil was very shiny and sparkerley it was the best pretty pencil she had ever found.When Alex started to draw with it she drew a enormous elephant but .  .  . the magic pencil snaped “OH NO,” shouted Alex “that was the lovleyist drawing i have ever done,” cried Alex.It was nearly bedtime but Alex ran to the repair shop as fast as she could and  when she got there she told the very kind man to tape it back together.The kind man coulden,t do that so she went back outside on that dark night she tried putting it back together by pushing it she did also it flue her  back  home  because    it   was   her  new   magic   pencil   best  friend   forever.

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magic pensil

May22

one bright  sunny morning a little girl could alex  one day she went to shcool alex was riting  a story when something apeard and it was a pensil then she  usedit  when  she used it whrot   for her when the bell rang  she  took the pensil  out side then when she went to play with her frends  she droped the pensil and  panicied  but there  was   a nuther pensil  in side   it when the  bell rang to line up and rite agen  then she  did mathes  litresy   siens when it was home time she took the pensil home and did   her homework  the end

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a mgic pensol

May22

one day they were a girl called  alix she had gold hair she found a magic pensol at the park

she got sent to china she found alot of frends to play whith at her park if ther aloud they can sleep at my park   but  you

will have to talck a difret langwige thats or rhyt you will have to bring you stuf ok lets go you

have a beter park then us said the china people said you will have to sleep her said alix al get a tent

no if got a big tent it can get us alling they had fun evry day now. robbie

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the magic pensel

May22

onse there was a ssmely gurl who was sciping down the cordoor sundly she saw a pensel ling on the floor she picked it up and whent to show it to her techer eveone gathd rowd the gurl and they gasbd they were inpresd whith chole she was evreones frend for ever then they went to play football on the green mooger whih mr rise he was the best football pla in the uoonvers after playing on the mooger they went on the fild the end.

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the seecrt pensul

May22

alix  was  in a  shop and  he  fawnd  a  pencl  when  he got to  scool he  started  droring  wif  his  pensl he  telapaported  when  he  was  landing  he  stud  on  the  pencl  a  man  sed  do you  want  me  to  fix  it  yes please  so he  did  finly  he  dun  he  gave  the  man  sum  moony  and  he  wallkd  of  sloly   he  was  bord  so  he drard  a letre  to  his  mum   he  rot  ther  was  a  flash  he  rot  agan  and  he  tellaportad  bake  home  he  chuct    the  pensl   in  the  bin.

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The magic pencil

May22

Once apon a time there were a little girl called alex and she was in her garden with her mum.She wanted to write down everything she tidyed up. Alex went to get some paper she could not find a pencil . suddenly a magic pencil apeared and alex said horay she wrote down everythinng she tidyed up. Alex ran out of paper so went to get some more. Finaly Alex and her mum wet back inside and checked she  didn’t miss anything out alex did not miss anything out.

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